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Originally Posted by HighHopes
Well thats just tripe..dont even bother continuing to write anything..ever...you should just shoot yourself actually...
Naah thats totally harsh but it was rather rubbish..you could do better..well actually I dont know if you could but I really do hope you could cos come on...that sucked!
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any suggestions?
i guess i should have said the format at first.
and i have several songs on this board. unlike most people who post their work here i attempt to write in different styles even if i'm not comfortable in them. It furthers my skills. This might not be one that i'm great in, but at least i try and push myself.