I don't know the song you are quoting but I do consider the musicality of words important, it normally works better if it fits the music. And you seem to be taking some of the phrases in those lyrics too literally as well. Some imaginative license is allowed perhaps. If the music is good I normally find that the lyrics are at least ok, there isn't normally some repetitive or really simple idea throughout the lyrics that sets back the music. And for most people the music is certainly the main thing. Great lyrics to bad music won't be listened to by many people.
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