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Old 07-02-2011, 10:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Question Is this anything good? :P

Hope: Confine Me

Confine me
This realm of what is to be expected
Every push and pull
Separating what could have been

Even as the lilies bloom
Death never soon retreats
The webs spun by demons in me
Capturing hope in task

As dreary sun melds into a different side
Forever as each world collides
Through all of this melted snow

Confine me
This malade of reason
Every push and pull
Further ascends into shrapnel

Even as each strand plucked away in disgust
Brushes itself off and retreats
Even as my realm is dead
I cheer for what I know
Since hope can never run red

Confine me
This lie of what is to be expected
Every push and pull
Separating fact from fiction

Even as the lilies bloom
Darkness hates to retreat
The fears and insecurities the spiders
Gently weave

In this belief
That entangles, tarnishes me
I still hold true:

My hope cannot rust
Since if it did it would redden
Within my stream of tears and blood

Confine me
This realm of what is always fake
Every tug and yank
Separating what could have been

As fading night reaches through into a protected side
Forever life waits until each world collides
Through all of this frozen haze

Never a second goes by
A remembrance
A chance to change what was foretold
To modify all fate
The message that separates and unfolds
Though the earth may shake

But still.
Confining me
This box of what is already known
Every push and pull
Causing me to choke

But still.
Hope is never forgotten
To change all that has been said
A telling of what chance
Has opportunity deserted on each head

But still… at least It exists.
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About how sometimes hope can hurt those who use it too much
And how without it all are crushed
And how fate chooses sides
And separates different places
Although it should not.

It is about how the expectations of the world are unfair.

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I want to know honest opinions... I was bored, idc if it sucks tbh... lulz
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