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~~[MERIT]~~ · 07-14-2011, 01:38 PM

It seems more like lyrics than poetry to me. But it's honestly not very cohesive. It has potential though. A few revisions, an acoustic guitar, a gravelly voice, and it could work man.

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~~[MERIT]~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Missouri, USA Posts: 4,814	It seems more like lyrics than poetry to me. But it's honestly not very cohesive. It has potential though. A few revisions, an acoustic guitar, a gravelly voice, and it could work man.