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Originally Posted by Mrd00d
Advice? Reality check yourself, mate. You're out of subject material at the moment because you're making it up. Start over, and this time write about things you're actually familiar with. Write about you.
What's missing in your rhymes, both of them, is any semblance of relatability to your subject. In my opinion. Keep writing.
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OK thank you for the encouragement
i will keep writing.