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Old 08-22-2005, 08:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
phoenixflames
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Pretty good stuff in my opinion. Did you write any music for it? What style of music would it go with? The lyrics seem to flow pretty well except for the last chunk (verse?). Overall, not shabby in the least.
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