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Originally Posted by hip hop bunny hop
It's too scattered. Why not just say, "Hi! I like quirky music, do you? If so, let us make band!"
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I actually agree with this.
The flyer is good and it would definitely catch my interest, but you'll have an easier time going with Bunny's sugestion. If you're looking for perfect but not easy, I suppose your flier works just fine.