Hey man, don't despair. I write in my journal every single day, and even though I have in excess of 14,000 views I only have a few hundred replies. It gets a little depressing sometimes and you feel like no-one's reading, but people are.
My only piece of advice is that your writing is a little depressing and also obscure, and maybe a little hard for people to appreciate. If you want people to comment try maybe talking about a band or musical influence, review an album, something. It's just there's nothing here that anyone can really respond to.
Clock v calendar was cool though
Don't give up: you have readers, even if we're just lurking in the shadows...
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