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Old 04-15-2012, 11:18 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Home gets my vote. Out of all of the submissions, it really captivated me the most and had me until the end. Hardyston Point was good as well, but the main character seemed to be a little too naive for the situation that he was in, but other than that, it was a well written piece.

The Lonely Thinker almost got my vote, it was a handsome poem that had a lot of beautiful moments that ended somewhat chillingly. But Home edged it out by a tad bit.

The rest were very good, but none of them held my interest so steadily as the ones mentioned.
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