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I should lengthen it. When I originally wrote it I knew it would be better longer, but I was writing it for a scholarship competition that allowed 1000 words max, and I hit 998, give or take one or two.

Yeah, that's probably the moment I'm most proud of. I bet the phrasing's awkward, i wrote it abruptly and in a tight time space, as well as condensing some of the story and trying to plant all these hints and things. I'll keep it in mind for sure if I come back to it.

Thanks so much! It's great to get feedback besides from my girlfriend, mom, and teachers. :)

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