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Originally Posted by blastingas10
I'm just gonna post a verse I've written.
Through eyes of ocean
Our senses lost in devotion
Treachery has changed my plans
So many thoughts left unspoken.
Any opinions? Criticism? Is it too cliche?
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woah man i like that verse quite a bit and i cant even put together music in my head for it cause i think it coudl go with so many genres. Nice