Honestly not really my style...I'm not much for rhyming. Here and there it's fine and if it just happens, but otherwise it comes to seem somewhat corny and also like a structural restriction in expression. I don't really like the style...A little cliche like someone said, although the part about the mockingbird did stand out to me. It's a bit too concrete for my taste and it doesn't feel so raw and real as I like
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