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Originally Posted by Blarobbarg
It's actually pretty good. It sucks that that happened to you, but you've come up with some very honest, very heartfelt words to express it. I don't know what sort of genre of music you're imagining for this, but it works quite well as a spoken word piece. At least, it does in my head.
Anyway, good work. The writing could be slightly better, but overall, very good.
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Haha aw thanks man :3 I always appreciate it when someone gives me a boost like that, I agree it could be better, the final was, but I accidentally deleted the file, and the handwrtten draft is all that remains of it.
I've written more songs since, but I regard this as my best piece so far.
But right now, I'm attempting a little acoustic/pop side project to keep me busy while I wait for people to start showing interest in a band.
OH, and the song was intended for a metal type thingo, with a fast beat, kinda like Parkway Drive's 'Carrion'