Hi!
Great work! It really reminds of the intro scene in Kill Bill 2 and I mean that as a compliment!
If you don't mind a little feedback, try adding layers to the background pads/strings and a bit of texture (guitarclouds if you can manage them). Something to really set an atmosphere because it sounds like this could be something with a lot of depth and the guitar melody can just kind of drip off this 'old record' sound you got going.
I like it a lot!
