Okay, so I've rewritten and recorded 'Rusty Cars'
Here are the lyrics:
take me to the broken homes
the barking dogs and rusty cars
crazy thought
take me to the hanging ropes
the smashed open windows
crazy thought
meet all the melting children,
the cold arms of friends
who just watch us run
to see how fast it ends
meet all the happy people
with pasts full of blindness
you can never learn to know them
to try would be mindless
take me to the concrete faces
the cut down trees and closing eyes
crazy thought
take me to the broken homes
the barking dogs and rusty cars
crazy thought
take me home
'cause I'm driving a car
with the devil in the backseat
hearts on the floor
and no one can track me
I'm posting the link to the song as well, to show you how the lyrics are meant to "sound" (if that makes sense). It would also be nice if anyone wanted to give me some feedback on the music itself!
Ghostwriter - Rusty Cars (Original Song) - YouTube
Thanks.