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Old 10-29-2012, 04:00 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by migliuks000 View Post
Soo... I haven't been here for a while and in that time I wrote a song of some sort and I would love to hear what you have to say
(I still haven't thought up of a name i would love some suggestions)
So the idea is that the first verse is her words and the rest is mine and I put in some rap sequences if you can call them that because... Well i wanted to
I'm sorry for any mistakes since English isn't my first language...

Here it is:

Rap 1:
I'm drowning myself in the last words that you said,
My heart is almost breaking for your lost love.
I'm drowning myself in the last words that you said,
My heart is almost breaking for your lost love.


Verse 1:

It feels like I'm sinking so deep
And I can no longer sleep
It feels like i'm on a leash
When he's so out of reach

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Very nicely written buddy. I assume this is you first attempt to song composition.

BTW have you tried to do some music mixing into it. Would love to hear the end result.
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