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Blarobbarg · 11-12-2012, 11:29 PM

Dunno about a song, but I thought it was a fairly nice poem. You may want to redo the last two lines of each section, it doesn't really sound right in my brain.

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Blarobbarg Do good. Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota Posts: 2,065	Dunno about a song, but I thought it was a fairly nice poem. You may want to redo the last two lines of each section, it doesn't really sound right in my brain. __________________ https://rateyourmusic.com/~Blarobbarg ｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆　^my RYM^　｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆ (◠‿◠✿)