Music Banter - View Single Post - Critique my poetry please! Thinking of publishing need honest opinions.

Face · 12-02-2012, 07:07 PM

All of them became a sing-song voice in my head, due to the rhythm in the lines.

The last one is the only one which was read in the "this is a poem" voice..in my head.

I don't know how this would help you, probably not at all.

12-02-2012, 07:07 PM	#7 (permalink)
Face Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: UK Posts: 306	All of them became a sing-song voice in my head, due to the rhythm in the lines. The last one is the only one which was read in the "this is a poem" voice..in my head. I don't know how this would help you, probably not at all.