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Old 12-02-2012, 07:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
slappyjenkins
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With nearly every piece of song writing/poetry I look at on here, I would have to say similar things. With this one...the lyrics are really solid, good rhymes, good visuals.

I guess it's hard to judge without knowing the melody or genre.

I like what I read, just can't hear it, ya know?

powerful stuff though
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