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Old 03-09-2013, 08:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
Black Francis
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Originally Posted by Powerstars View Post
Love it! Would make a great song. Power ballad, probably.
lol you think?

if i WOULD make it a song i would probably make it into a death metal song or something lol
Quote:
Originally Posted by CLOSER View Post
"For i loved you whole heartily
But i do not know love"

**** thats great
Thank you i appreciate it ^_^

it's nice to get some positive feedback as im sure some negative is to come

i actually wrote that piece to explain to my GF i deal with depression
that's how i explained to her through a poem

im surprised she didn't leave me lol
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