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Old 03-15-2013, 12:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
Black Francis
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very nice

i especially liked 'You' and 'Great'

i also like the way you write
you pack alot of wisdom in a few lines

i relate ALOT to the subjects you write about
it's the same subjects i often use for my own amateur poems
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