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Originally Posted by Fenixpunk
i see your point, that line is pretty vague. "From the shadows that lonliness can cast on the objects that fly by way to fast" i guess what i was going for was something simple, yet something that someone can make their own relations to it by not having it be too specific.
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I don't even mean the whole line, the "From the shadows that loneliness can cast" phrase is good. Its just the next part that strikes me as weak.