Honestly I think you have a decent enough journal. I don't necessarily listen to the same genres as you but I think being straight to the point and short works for some people. My opinion would be to expand out and maybe try a totally different genre then soft rock/classic rock. Thats my opinion since you asked for it in the shouty. I've read better and worse and I haven't created a journal so you have a head start on me. Later.
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