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Circus Horse · 06-19-2013, 01:15 PM

I would change this bit of the middle eight

"When did we drift apart?
Weren't we there from the start?"

To

"When did we drift apart?
Or has it been like this from the start?"

Apart from that it's pretty good. Well done!

06-19-2013, 01:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
Circus Horse Groupie Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Scotland Posts: 17	I would change this bit of the middle eight "When did we drift apart? Weren't we there from the start?" To "When did we drift apart? Or has it been like this from the start?" Apart from that it's pretty good. Well done!