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Old 11-08-2005, 01:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks
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1. I liked the flow of this. and it is spelled "incisions"

2. this is really, really short, but seeing as it is poetry, it isn't bad but I don't understand the adjustment line.

3. I never ever say very good. But I will here. This is very good. It speaks to me somehow. I like this.
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