Originally Posted by riseagainstrocks

1. I liked the flow of this. and it is spelled "incisions"

2. this is really, really short, but seeing as it is poetry, it isn't bad but I don't understand the adjustment line.-adjustment being a public execution adjusting the rope as in someone's being hung or whichever kind of dark i know....

3. I never ever say very good. But I will here. This is very good. It speaks to me somehow. I like this.