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Old 07-15-2013, 05:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'm wondering the same as Trollheart.

But I also read the lyrics and honestly, they're a little mediocre. I don't know where you drew inspiration from or how passionate you are about it, man, so that's just constructive criticism. I just think it sounded more like poetry than lyrics.
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I feel that people have executed this type of thing before with much more substance and originality.
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