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Old 12-09-2013, 08:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Some of my sample lyrics/poems

I'm starting a musical project, and I've written a few songs/poems already, and I want your honest opinion on this one.

Follow me here brother
as we venture into the doors of ahead.

Let us shower in
the great gifts of
American dream and prayer.

Feed on the morning,
waste the dawn,
repeat.

Feed on the morning,
waste the night,
stop.

Look around us,
at this fine lake beside
our new home.

Dip your hand in,
and rub your face with it,
feeling.

Invite it,

Feed the dawn,
waste the evening.
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