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Old 12-14-2013, 07:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like it - more as a poem than a song, because of the consistent structure, although that said, many songs do follow more unconventional structures.

I love the imagery, and the elegance and economy of language.

My only possible bone of contention is the notion of prayer as a gift, however, that's a separate issue to the quality of the literature itself.

Overall, very nice work!
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