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joea · 01-05-2014, 06:16 PM

Hi everyone, I'm looking to start joining in the thread to share some ideas and open myself up for lyrical feedback. I have a vague writing style, and am open to your comments/critiques;

Far Behind

Here I stand again
Soaking in the pain
Buried in self doubt
Digging up the remains

My shadow is a chalk outline
That is shaped like a maze
Could it be that I'm fine?
Either way I've been dazed

CHORUS
Never thought of it that way
Didn't mean to be so blind
Even as the memory fades
I'll never leave that life behind

You can listen to the song at ReverbNation if you'd like to hear how it works with music (/meadeave). My biggest hurdle is writing lyrics that intertwine with our music perfectly while still having substance. Thanks everyone!

01-05-2014, 06:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
joea Groupie Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 1	Lyrics/Song - Far Behind Hi everyone, I'm looking to start joining in the thread to share some ideas and open myself up for lyrical feedback. I have a vague writing style, and am open to your comments/critiques; Far Behind Here I stand again Soaking in the pain Buried in self doubt Digging up the remains My shadow is a chalk outline That is shaped like a maze Could it be that I'm fine? Either way I've been dazed CHORUS Never thought of it that way Didn't mean to be so blind Even as the memory fades I'll never leave that life behind You can listen to the song at ReverbNation if you'd like to hear how it works with music (/meadeave). My biggest hurdle is writing lyrics that intertwine with our music perfectly while still having substance. Thanks everyone!