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Old 01-20-2014, 04:01 AM   #31 (permalink)
Cyril Sneer
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I wrote a poem whilst away on holiday last week, it's the first time I have written a poem since school although I have written songs. I hope this doesn't contravene the posting rules, this isn't a case of shameless self promotion but mods can delete this post if they deem it to be. Anyway, it's about smoking.

Accusing eyes with faux surprise,
Don't get to see what they despise,
The result of a bad choice made,
The disappointment will not fade,
It's up to me to make the change,
My lifestyle needs to rearrange,
A promise that goes unfulfilled,
The trust in me has long been killed.
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