Hey there,
I like what I heard (I went to your Reverbnation). First off, kudos for mentioning Failure as an influence, they're one of my favorite bands.
Your song is structured really well, guitar solo is good, and your drummer is awesome. I would say the vocals are a bit dodgy though. Especially when you sing "way" in the chorus, it feels a bit off key. Something I do to help this (I'm insecure about my vocals lol) is have everyone play the song slower, to really nail the focal points with your voice. Good stuff, man. Let me know when you post more.
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