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Old 03-05-2014, 10:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Song I wrote yesterday, I'll post it with music once I get the buffoons in my band to learn and record it. Comments, bashing, criticisms, etc. are welcomed wholeheartedly.

I walk in footsteps, carved into the sand
they fit perfectly around my shoes
I leave behind, what the body craves
I'm leaving you, now show me oblivion

Searching, staring, casting out my eyes
to places, unknown, feeding my desire to

Fuel my mind and fill this vision
the abandoned fog can never catch up
I leave behind, what the body craves
I'm leaving you, now show me oblivion

Searching, staring, casting out my eyes
to places, unknown, feeding my desire to

Run

Hungry, empty, waiting, patiently, for me to
take away all the melancholy
Footsteps lead, me away from here
from tragedy, I need the strength to

Leave behind, what the body craves
I'm leaving you, now show me
now show me
oblivion
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