Good luck getting any help on here mate. They're all voyeurs. From what ive seen, people only get excited about lyrics and actually comment when the lyrics are all about hating yourself and the world. They fuc.king love that sh.it.
Ive had over 2000 views and not one comment or critique.
Your lyrics are actually really good. Its hard to comment on the flow without hearing the tune though cos everyone does it slightly differently. People read my lyrics and sometimes think it doesnt flow right, but when its done to music they get it. My advice would be: get the music sorted then just fu.ck about with the bits that you dont like. Hope that helps
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