Originally Posted by Mr.Cramming

Hi there, Ian.

So, I took a look in your pieces of work. It is really nice to see how active you are in writing, I mean, you are inspired by something, that's a thing I can tell. Now, in a slightly negative manner, I will have to suggest you taking your songwriting a little bit further. Meaning, that you should overcome those 5-12 sentences each song. You better start making more texts in your songs, and not just a few little ideas. For me, somewhy, it seems like you're just doodling a few words together, just to create a song and post it here. Try to concentrate (if you play an instrument, try to find a few chords and a melody), have the feel, be in a neutral mode of deep inspiration, and then start writing your heart out. That's the way you might get a little more successful in your writing. Songwriting is not about your writing skills, but about how emotional and genuine you are.