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Black Francis · 03-09-2015, 11:31 PM

That last entry 'Say anything' i made for a forum poetry contest so i welcome any critiques to make it better.

but like i mentioned in the OP, plz be constructive about your critiques only then will i listen.

03-09-2015, 11:31 PM	#26 (permalink)
Black Francis Out of Place Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: in an abstract house Posts: 4,111	That last entry 'Say anything' i made for a forum poetry contest so i welcome any critiques to make it better. but like i mentioned in the OP, plz be constructive about your critiques only then will i listen. __________________ "Hey Kids you got to meet the MIGHTY PIXIES!" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JbRbCtIgW3A