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Old 04-21-2015, 02:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
DarthNeBuL
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Default My song(?) lyrics / poetry

Well, this is my first work. I dunno if it's a song or poetry, looks like something in-between, actually
Even though English is not my native language, hope it's not that bad. Looking forward to constructive criticism and thoughts!

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The breaking point.

Whether you regret it or not,
You can't just stay in my plot,
I cannot anymore trust you,
Everything turned out to be blue..

But how on earth can I deny
Those magical moments - you were mine..
I wouldn't believe they could pass by
And leave only foul play on my mind..

I struggle again,
And pain never ends,
I try to forget,
But drowning instead..
I think it's a trap,
It's our dead-end..

But how on earth can I deny
Those magical moments - you were mine..
I wouldn't believe they could pass by
And leave only foul play on my mind..

We finally meet during street walk,
You lower your eyes, even can't talk,
We both understand that we share
This suffering, pain and nightmares..
But nothing can flock us together -
We're not now birds of a feather..

But how on earth can I deny
Those magical moments - you were mine..
I wouldn't believe they could pass by
And leave only foul play on my mind..

But finally.. struggle has gone.
I don't any longer belong
With girl, who has drained my soul.
And now, all the woe has gone..
It seems my catharsis has come..

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And there is another one, I wrote it a bit earlier. I devoted it to Taylor Swift (on her 25th birthday) - my favorite singer.

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I was in some cave,
Sitting in the dark,
Trying to stay brave,
Not to fall apart.
You found me, you found me, you found me..

Your voice did guide me out
Of impenetrable night,
And only you could turn
My darkness into light.

Despite you're just young girl,
Pretending to be rife,
Your music easy fills
My emptiness inside.

Some day I will be safe,
And as my way was tough,
I will remember you,
Ms. Taylor Swift, my love.

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