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Old 06-28-2015, 11:39 AM   #30 (permalink)
Black Francis
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Originally Posted by Golden Lights View Post
I will leave you intact
It will all be my fault
For i loved you whole heartily
But i do not know love


Love this part especially. Good job, it is hard for me to do longer pieces personally
Thnx

I don't write long poems either, ideally i want to share its message in just a few memorable lines.
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