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Old 12-23-2005, 02:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
bluntman
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Post Alone in the dark

Verse 1
I sit alone now as I speak
a lonley thought lingers
a frightened little boy
sits alone in the dark
cold from the shadow of light

Verse 2
A bell rings
and alone here he sits
in this room
full of people
one man speaks
no-one listens
but here he sits
this frightened little boy
alone in the dark
cold from the shadow of light...

Verse 3
He does not speak
but he feels his lonliness
heavy on his shoulders
he continues to back himself
into a corner
hoping for someone
to notice him
but still he sits
this firghtened little boy
alone in the dark cold
from the shadow of light

Bridge
The ridicule runs
through his head
thinking of all that's been said
he trys to ignore
but it's already stored

Verse 4
I sit alone now as I speak
one thought lingers
a fightened little boy
that's sits alone in the dark
cold from the shadow of light
is frightened no more...
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