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Old 07-05-2015, 10:16 AM   #6 (permalink)
E5I5O
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Thank you guys, Ii think I might actually have a grasp of this to some extent.. and tuning the D down? That kinda of reminds me of the way System of a Down has their guitars tuned... which, of course, is a pretty innovative idea.. here are some more lyrics I have. I actually have music to these lyrics, but I'll have to wait til I get to fifteen posts before I can post that vid, but until then here are the lyrics:

Mountain

There is a mountain we all must ascend
The path we choose will determine our end
We scale it's sheer walls to see the unseen
We want to see what our chosen path brings

The mountain tapers far steeper for some
It towers lofty and will yield for none

There is a mountain we all have to climb
Rising above us far into the sky
It's peak is shrouded for clouds loom so low
All you can see is the ground far below

Losing their grasp some will fall down below
Some won't climb further and some just let go

The paths we travel are cluttered with those
Whose only wish is to veer us off course
And yet they wonder why all hope is lost
But they don't see all the damage they cause

There is a mountain, it's peak leads the way
Others will follow the paths that we laid
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