Jabonator, those are some great vids. You should be proud. I loved Thoughts of a Morning After, that was my favorite one. As far as the lyrics go, well, they say what they say. They come from you. As long as you're getting across the message you want to convey and get across, that's all that matters. Just make sure the syllables fit within the rhythm of the melody, that's all that matters musically as far as the lyrics go. The music is obviously deep and touching. You've already got that. Being a creator and singer/song writer means being more sensitive than others - it's the only way an artist can create and convey their art. It's a tough deal. But you don't want to let that work against you. Give yourself some credit. You don't need to hear other people say you're good just so you can know you're good and feel good about it. As long as you're a good, positive person, and
always try hard to be in the right, that's all that really matters. Never doubt yourself. You're good
