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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
its your poem, but to me...i disagree, what you're trying to give out is not obvious or showing through in the poem. The beinging was good, then it became random, then it was cut short in the ending. The point you're trying to make is hidden.
i agree with Alexisonfire
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it doesn't show. That's new.
The first stanza is the character facing death he is confused and can't tell why this is happening (which most people feel before they kill themself)
the 2nd, 3rd and 4th stanza is showing the reasons for suicide. The person has been through a lot of torment and feels as though they are to blame.
the last stanza is the ironic truth he is killing himself. He did nothing wrong only recieved wrongs from others so kills himself in the end.