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Originally Posted by this_guy
so are you saying I should have thought of a more creative way for the guy to die. I was trying to show the usual teen going through this and this is how it usualy happens
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Then just don't the usual teen thing is overdone and lame.
How about the kids is mentally unstable and thinks he can fly?
Something thats unique not the typical crap, but if your going to make bland poetry then fine by me.
Just say so.