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Old 12-29-2005, 03:41 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Alexisonfire
Then just don't the usual teen thing is overdone and lame.
How about the kids is mentally unstable and thinks he can fly?
Something thats unique not the typical crap, but if your going to make bland poetry then fine by me.
Just say so.

this thing is said a lot in songs I haven't seen it used in poems as much.

But a lot of poems people write they have gone through the experience I have went through this though not that. You may say that might be bland but then a lot of poems may be bland in the same sense
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