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Old 12-29-2005, 03:42 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
read what i put again, i edited it.


your poem sounds like a emo-poser. Work on the ending.

Oh crap my poem has know been caught with a teen trend because of its theme.
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