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Old 12-29-2005, 04:17 PM   #29 (permalink)
Crazy Luv
a l'amou fou pou tout
 
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cut off the last stanza or just rewrite it. its going against what you're trying to say. its saying it was your fault, not theirs, which by what you told me, is not what you're trying to put out.
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