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Old 12-31-2015, 05:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
Angel3010
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Default Are these lyrics any good?

Hello, I'm a new member here. I might do a song for youtube one day but I would first like to see if you guys like my lyrics. And english isn't my first language so sorry about grammar.

WOLF:

One sunrise left to see
Are we happy now, are we?
One mountain left to conquer
The only place I admire
One fear left to defeat
So we feel our hearthbeat
Life was a stranger
We always lived on the edge looking for a danger
We've seen the world
While watching endless sky
We thought we could fly

Deep inside there is a monster sleeping
Frozen in time while weeping
But when it wakes up rage will appear
Raaage!!!!
It will burn down anything
Raaage!!!!
It will burn down anything
We'll go crazy yeaaaaaaa
Like a wolf x4

One sunset left to see
Are we saisfied now are we?
One cry from stranger left to ignore
They keep asking for more
One man left to burry
And then run away in hurry
We aimed for stars
But dark clouds shaded us
We got lost in reality
Dreamed impossible dream

Deep inside there is a monster sleeping
Frozen in time while weeping
But when it wakes up rage will appear
Raaage!!!!
It will burn down anything
Raaage!!!!
It will burn down anything
We'll go crazy yeaaaaaaa
Like a wolf x4

Is that you crying?
Have you lost the battle yet?
Oooooh! Ooooh!
Where am I?
Where is justice?
Those are questions I don't know
And I never will
I lost right direction
And now I'm here lonely
Like a wolf x4



NIGHTMARE:

Big cities are built in a day
Oh all that places I've never seen
And yet I feel like I'm home
I feel free like a bird
Happy faces of people I've met
But can't tell where
I keep seeing her
Everywhere I look, everywhere I go
It can't fade
It won't fade

But when mist appears
Everything starts crushing down
I can't tell if it's true or not
Am I dreaming for too long?
Is it a dream or reality?
Did I forget to wake up?

Grey cities are built in a day
Oh all that places I keep seeing
And yet they are strange to me
I feel locked like in a jail
Faces full of despair
But I can't tell why
I wish I felt something
But I feel nothing
It can't fade
It won't fade


But when mist appears
Everything starts crushing down
I can't tell if it's true or not
Am I dreaming for too long?
Is it a nightmare or reality?
Did I forget to wake up?

I'm lost in my own dreams
They only thing I have
Maybe I forgot to wake up
Or maybe I don't want to
Is it a nightmare or dream?
I can't say anymore
But when mist appears
Everything starts crushing down



BRIDGE:

As I'm walking on the bridge
I see memories floating down the river
I see pictures of my past
Floating down the river
But I'm standing on the bridge safe
On the bridge I made myself
It keeps me from falling
Into abyss of oblivion
That bridge binds my memories
Keeps them close to me

Make them rich!
(memories)
Make them strong!
(memories)
Make the bridge
(memories)
Of a stone
(memories)
To keep them close to your heart

River can't be tamed
It will wash away everything that falls in
It just won't stop running
Oblivion won't forgive
So I'm standing here on the bridge
Watching wild river
We're just flash in time
But some things last for centuries
Try to stay still in the river
Like a stone


Make them rich!
(memories)
Make them strong!
(memories)
Make the bridge
(memories)
Of a stone
(memories)
To keep them close to your heart

I wanna make memories I know will never fade
Because at the end
What have we got left
But our memories?

Make them rich!
(memories)
Make them strong!
(memories)
Make the bridge
(memories)
Of a stone
(memories)
To keep them close to your heart


GREY ROUTINE

Waking up
Getting up
Making coffe
Eating breakfast
Brushing teeth
Getting dressed
Going out

As I'm driveing through the maze of grey buildings
I'm listening to the radio
Traffic is huge
Traffic lights are grey
All I see is grey
Grey sky is weeping
Cleaning soul of the city
People are in hurry to get nowhere
They are starring at their phones

All I see is grey, grey grey
Routine is killing me
Everything repeats over and over
I'm waiting for colours to shine me

x3



ON THE FLOOR:

Lying on the floor
Looking up above
I imagine how does sky look like
Chained to the past
Unable to move
I imagine how does sky look like

And when night falls
I hear desperate calls
Of ones I used to know
Heroes that I saw

(chorus)
Dancing on the floor
Wanting more and more
Embrace shadows
Standing all alone
Stage is gone
Embrace shadows
Dancing on the floor
Losing more and more

Faking all the joy
Dreaming all the time
I imagine how does sky look like
Locked in a room
Wrongly understood
I imagine how does sky look like

Like puppet on the strings
With broken wings
I look for better days
On unexplored ways

(chorus x2)
Dancing on the floor
Wanting more and more
Embrace shadows
Standing all alone
Stage is gone
Embrace shadows
Dancing on the floor
Losing more and more

Last edited by Angel3010; 04-11-2017 at 12:19 PM.
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