Everyone sucks when they start, like one of my first songs contained the line "Were all just living to die so lets slit our wrists and cry" =P and for your first its good. Normally suicide is cliche, but writing about the typical middle age man jumping off the building isn't really.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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