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madeinNY · 01-10-2006, 04:55 PM

I think it's very good for your first try, but the spelling mistakes kinda makes it hard on the eyes, but that has nothing to do with the music.

Yea, it's definatly not cliche by any means, but, I think you should state why he is killing himself in the song.

01-10-2006, 04:55 PM	#6 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	I think it's very good for your first try, but the spelling mistakes kinda makes it hard on the eyes, but that has nothing to do with the music. Yea, it's definatly not cliche by any means, but, I think you should state why he is killing himself in the song. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol