with this:
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She wanders around aimlessly
She walks around with a purpose
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completely contradictory statements. pick one and run with it.
then later on you go on to say:
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They aimlessly wander about
They have no purpose, its just a front
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so which one is it?
here's another one:
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She locks her secrets deep inside
She is as open as a book
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if she locks her secrets deep inside, she's not an open book, it doesnt make sense.
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